#2
heaven086,
The intro guitar riffs sounds familiar, but couldn't say how or why. I hear this a lot about my tunes, but your vocals get too loud at times, so they'll seem super loud to others probably. Seems like you need a compressor or limiter for the vocals. Guitar playing & vocals are good, and so is the song itself. Please review my music at this link:

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1700332