#2
Sounds kinda cool, spacey, progressive metal. The guitar playing is talented and interesting. However, the song lacks direction and seems unsure of itself in the same way Between the Buried and Me compose their heavy sections. This may have been what you were going for, but it comes across as overly complex and hard to decipher the underlying rhythm - IMO.

Alternative rock song:
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1700669
#3
Yea thanks man I agree with you I have no idea what I was going for after a certain point LOL..... I am going to check out your track soon.