#1
Howdie everyone! I'm back with a brand new track, give it a listen and let me know what you think! And of course, as always, Crit for Crit!

This Creature Feeding Off My Soul

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This Creature Feeding Off my Soul
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I laugh and sing in these storms
Inside I'm drained and war-torn
I face these invisible hordes
Nock my arrow, draw my sword
These cold winds freeze my blood
As these tears inside create a flood
Within myself I meet these foes
A journey that I take on alone

I cant feel
I cant see
This is real
I cant be

I keep falling and loosing bits
This insanity must form my ignorance
This creature feeding off my soul
Seems more than ready to deal the final blow
I keep falling through ignorance
This insanity must form those little bits
The creature feeding off my force
Seems more than ready for the worst


I take my lead and aim at the swarm
My head falls; I'm so battle worn
Pick myself up and try to realize
These demons will always be inside
Ripping and tearing
Leaving me fearing
I wish I could push through this hell
Maybe then I could control myself

I cant feel
I cant see
This is real
I cant be

I keep falling and loosing bits
This insanity must form my ignorance
This creature feeding off my soul
Seems more than ready to deal the final blow
I keep falling through ignorance
This insanity must form those little bits
The creature feeding off my force
Seems more than ready for the worst
Quote by mangablade
If star wars had a Heavy Metal band (no not "Vader" lol), then you would be it. You sound like a anrgy mother****ing Yoda.


I sound like an angry Yoda...is that a good thing...or a bad thing? lol
#2
Hey man this is badass! Nice guitar and drum sound! Vocals fit nicely with this style! Keep rocking brother! ( angry Yoda for the win!)
Last edited by Metal Turtle at May 2, 2016,
#3
Thanks, dude! Also, I listened to like 5 of your songs on SoundCloud and I have to say, you are amazing! I wish I could have like 2% of your talent. LOVE the old school Metallica sound you've got!
Quote by mangablade
If star wars had a Heavy Metal band (no not "Vader" lol), then you would be it. You sound like a anrgy mother****ing Yoda.


I sound like an angry Yoda...is that a good thing...or a bad thing? lol
#5
Really good, I would just say maybe the guitar tone is a bit muted sounding and the vocals stand out too much from the rest of the mix (IMO)