#1
I've lost all of my friends,
I don't have a family (again)...
I used to hold a crooked smile
with eyes gleaming with archives
of vast emptiness. I hate everything
but would do anything
to end the approaching famine
of happiness.

Is it jealousy?
Is it intimidation?
Is it Africa?

It is unfortunate
that I am only human.
#2
I'm not afraid to admit I don't understand this. It's the Africa line that threw me.

Anyhow, not really understanding it makes it harder for me to critique. I'm not so keen on 'gleaming with archives of emptiness/I hate everything' - a tad emo. I'd like to see the questions asked being answered, or at least a motivation for asking them.
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#3
Quote by Herr Rararr
I'd like to see the questions asked being answered, or at least a motivation for asking them.


I think they were answered.

@Fred: Me too.
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