The tone is ok enough. You got a decent amount of dirt on top of it, but not too much. I hear a lot of that playing in a box if you know what I mean. You have to be willing to go into uncharted territory to really make it your own, otherwise it's just an exercise in a scale, this one being Am. In any case you could do a lot worse for a first solo.

Learn some more techniques to throw in there, but most of all Feel It!
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I was about to diss kornflipsk8er, but then i realized hes an 03er and im an 09er.
I am inferior to him.

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