#1
Hey guys! So this is my first attempt on making a somewhat fast-paced rap lyric. And yes, some of the rhymes are supposed to be a bit "off" in timing and stuff, and yes this has obviously Dark Souls references to it as I love that game. Comments are appreciated! Cheers.

[Verse 1]
Man in the race of souls for money
Bitch, you tried to play me like a dummy
But my reality is all of your inner souls
In my room, redefinin' the meanin' of black holes
The souls I uplifted,
all the souls I enlisted
to be part of the dark souls
but not like I insisted
I'm the gatekeeper
deciding your faith
Calling me a sinner
when you know that I ain't

[Verse 2]
Careful with your tongue
you're still so young
Don't slip off the coast,
I might not be there when you need me the most
You better make up your mind if you're taking the fall
I'll be there waitin', makin' the call
Embrace your destiny, don't wait for it to come around
Growth is what comes from the pain when you hit the ground
Get up now,
you're not the first to know how hard it is to fall
Died so many times, yet I'm living through it all
Failure is man-made, only leads to depression
Don't let your mind manipulate itself; break through the oppression

[Hook]
(Dark soul with a heart of gold)
Never grow old, never grow old
(Dark soul with a heart of gold)
Live your life just like you've been told
(Dark soul with a heart of gold)
Your mind is a matrix ready to unfold

[Bridge]
We are
something more
than a metaphor of your fantasy lore
Spill the ink, let it sink
into these pages that defines you and blinds you

[Verse 3]
Feelin' the attack, feelin' the contact
Feelin' the rhythm as my tongue doesn't lack
the movement of improvement everytime that I'm movin'
my hand on the microphone like I know what I'm doin'
Don't just sit and stare and glare everywhere
Even if you don't care I know you are there
Feel the energy, feel the flow, feel the control
and join me on my adventure to collect the dark souls

[Hook x2]
(Dark soul with a heart of gold)
Never grow old, never grow old
(Dark soul with a heart of gold)
Live your life just like you've been told
(Dark soul with a heart of gold)
Your mind is a matrix ready to unfold
Last edited by JohnPetrucciFan at May 26, 2016,
#2
I don't know much about rap, but it works well. Slick work.
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