#2
The intro is alright. I notice you're using a lot of odd time sigs, and while that's cool, imo you don't want to overuse them. I've never been a big fan of this disjointed sounding stuff. Bar 34 is actually alright, the 5/8 doesn't mess with the "grooviness" of the rest of the riff.

I don't really get the riff at bar 18, is it meant to sound awkward? 18-20 make sense i guess, and I actually kinda like it, and then at 22-24 it sort of stops making any sense to me, as far as what the purpose of this riff is. maybe i'm just not a fan of the style.

58-61 is sweet. that's the sort of prog riff that i enjoy more.

At 66 I start getting the urge to skip, since the riff doesn't interest me all that much and it seems to be a repeat of what was earlier.

98 is so sick dude. I also like the contrast of that 106 riff right after it.

114-137, im wondering if you can just remove this stuff (at least if you're not gonna put some noticeable variations in it), i feel like you could do away with it and just go straight into 138.

Hmm... I feel like the song needs a distinct climax somewhere, though. Maybe you could throw in a solo near 146.
#3
Awesome feedback, man! Really appreciate it I'll take it all into consideration!

Also wanted to add that I'm strongly considering adding some vocal lines to spice it all up a bit

EDIT: Tried deleting the part you mentioned. Much better! Thanks!
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Last edited by Caelumamittendu at Jun 3, 2016,