Not my best work so far, but it's something at least and it means I've gotten back into writing something again after a 2 months break. It has some weaknesses for sure like being sort of disjointed in parts, but it's what it is, I think I'm keeping it

Let me know what you think though still
Really digging the intro,especially the piano. Sure,the song is a bit rough around the edges but it sure has some potential. Keep up the good work!

And nice work with the drums by the way!

Here's my latest:https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1702957