#1
Just looking for some criticism on this mix/composition as it's my first go in a pop punk style genre.

https://soundcloud.com/kylendm/progress-on-pop-punk-song
Guitars:
Ibanez UV777P
Ibanez RGD2127FX
Ibanez RG3120TW
Ibanez RGD7321
Ibanez RG6003FM
Ibanez SA160
Jackson Slatxmg3-7
Amps:
Baron Custom Amps K88
Rivera Knucklehead TRE
Fryette Sig: X
Randall RM4 /w Modded modules
Cabs:
Mesa 4x12
Bogner 4x12
Peavey 4x12(K85s)
#2
Really uplifting. Excellent riffing and the mix isn't bad either. Personally,I'd rise the volume of the drums just a little bit! The song seems a bit disjointed at times and could really benefit from some vocals,but that's pretty much it.

Keep up the good work!

Here's my latest:https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1702957
#3
kyle,
Audio quality, guitar riffs & playing all very good! I like that little phaser guitar break. Drums are good too. Electric bass does not stand out, though I think it's there to beef up things under the rhythm guitar(s). Some good vocals wouldn't hurt. Still quite good overall. Please review my music at this link:

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1703623