Have not added bass yet but I plan to add it in at sometime with a few other tweaks, all kinds of opinions are welcome.
Not really my style, so I could be missing something - but there doesn't seem to be an actual song. I don't mean because it lacks vocals, but it seems to lack any hooks. It feels like an extended break that a band would stick into a live version of one of their songs. It would however, be very good as that. The instruments are played really well and it does rock hard, would gladly mosh to it. Just not convinced about it's recording potential. C4C? - https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1703546