#1
Can't think of a decent title at the moment.

I've never felt able as a lyric writer, but I was feeling a little inspired and this came together surprisingly quickly. Not especially deep, but it rhymes without being cheesy (hopefully)! The metering I had in mind is a complete ripoff of a Grand Magus song though.

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Your misplaced anger
Follows a simple tune
A song with the hook of a lullaby
And the spirit of ruin

You plot and you scheme away
For lack of a better belief
But all of the glory of your kings and gods
Won't save you from me

I am the hammer, the reaper, the blade in the dark
The guillotine, the needle, the gas and the spark
When the worms are through with you, and your existence is all but through
You can be assured that I'll be watching it too

The depth of your convictions
Couldn't drown a small child
Behind your puritan carping
Lies a sinful soul wishing to run wild

You dramatize your life with nonsense
You've nothing better to do
But the blood that you've spilled, is nothing compared to the vomit your being makes me spew

I am the people, the earth, natural law
The vengeance, the fire, I'll torment you all
When the worms are through with you, and your existence is all but through
You can be assured that I'll be watching it too
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#2
The words are relentless and don't stop. Solid most of the way through, except this bit:

You dramatize your life with nonsense
You've nothing better to do
But the blood that you've spilled, is nothing compared to the vomit your being makes me spew


This bit doesn't flow as well with the rest of the piece. I still like the fury, but the way it's worded...stumbles.
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