#1
I posted the unfinished sketch of this song quite some time ago. I had never forgot about it and finally finished it a week or so ago.

Vampire

I'm starting to feel like a vampire
The sunlight burns my skin
Hide all day and drive all night
Selling my soul for a sin

I'm starting to feel like a vampire
From this tomb I can't rise
I'd bite my own neck just to spite myself
Somewhere underneath the night sky

It casts a shadow that I can't escape
The blood in my veins runs cold
I wake every morning in some kind of pain
As thought I'm eight-hundred years old

I'm starting to sound like a vampire
I've never said that much at all
Waiting outside your window tonight
But I won't answer when you call

I'm starting to look like a vampire
My eyes have grown empty and cold
I've lost my own damn reflection
Looking through the lies I've told

It casts a shadow that I can't escape
The blood in my veins runs cold
I wake every morning in some kind of pain
As though I'm eight-hundred years old
I might not come down from this castle I've built
Overlooking the blood red sea
My time in the darkness is one bitter pill
That no one should choke on but me

I'm starting to live like a vampire
The daylight hurts my eyes
You don't really know the danger you're in
Till silver bullets fall from the sky
#2
I'd shy away from the literals and cliches of being a vampire and focus more on how it impacts you emotionally. Also, you don't have to keep telling us you're a vampire. We get it.
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#3
Great lyrics. I like it so much Thanks for commenting here. More option are available in our soruces
Last edited by deafasers at Jul 25, 2016,
#4
It's quite nice , but I'd reduce the amount of times you say the word vampire. Change it for something like "I'm starting to look like one", I hope you get me. In any case, well done :3
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