Been a couple of weeks since the last thing but I've had a nice injection of inspiration so HERE GOES DIS.

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I'm liking these three RPG style pieces you are doing. some parts make me imagine LoZ: Twilight Princess, but like an expansion into new areas.
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You've touched on a variety of moods and captured them very eloquently, and frankly it's pretty good as is, but that being said...

I feel like it need more development. Don't ask me exactly what that means because I don't know, I just feel like you're not making the most of this music. Like it could go for 2 or 3 times as long and be even better. Perhaps more 'empty space' between the segments, or a more definite crescendo in the middle or the end.

I just think you could extrapolate the atmosphere and build on it more.