Last edited by joao.thrasher1 at Jul 5, 2016,
You're on the way! Apart from obvious timing problems here and there, try to sound the chords more clearly. The playing needs more conviction ... go for it. Be a good idea to try one version that's essentially chordal, and another that 's melodic (soloing), and get these together before trying to glue both into one, which is hard.
jerrykramskoyThanks jerry, I will work these chords