#2
OT,
Glad you had some vocals, because otherwise it would have been very repetitive at times. Most of the vocals are good, though one spot sounded pitchy to me (0:21). The synth thing at the end made the song more interesting. Overall I liked the song & recording. Keep at it! Perhaps you could review my music at this link:

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1707148