I like your guitar tone, however I think you could high pass the lower frequencies as it sounds really muffled on the low end. The drums sound crisp and punchy. Bass sounds good as well. Vocals seem to fit the music, everyone has their own unique voice and you seem to have found yours. I like the lyrics too, people are assholes lol. I would not label this as death metal though, it's definitely more "core" than anything. I do like the intro and hope you can use more of that creepy atmospheric vibe in more of your songs and throughout.

I have a song here, no need to go super in depth. https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1708012 I also followed you on soundcloud if that gives ya some support!