#1
Link to track: https://soundcloud.com/andresjam/resila-supplanted
Track title: Supplanted

Hey guys!

I've been absent for awhile. Been busy with work related certifications and can finally take a break for a bit.

Anyhow, this is the latest iteration to my project "Resila"

I was aiming to make a track similar to something by the bands Ghost or Tribulation. I'm not sure if I succeeded on that front. I'd appreciate any feedback you might have regarding the mix, instrumentation, or whatever else captures your attention.

C4C: Please leave a link to your track or forum post.

Thanks dudes
#2
Hey man!
First off the playing is really good, definitely no issue there.

The only things I can be critical of are mix elements/how you've mixed the song:
The Clean guitars are too loud, I'd turn them down a small amount, although this may fit the aesthetic of the genre you're writing for and I may just be too unfamiliar with it to appreciate how things are generally leveled.
You're kick drum is not powerful enough, I'd turn up the sub lows and compress it a little more, or find a new sample.
Same goes for the snare drum, I'll actually PM you a link to a snare drum I have up on my drum sample store that could be of use to you.
I think overall the track is really good, it's just lacking a pro mix, which is understandable.

My Thread:
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1708544
#3
Sounds nice! I can't really comment on the mix since I'm not familiar with the style of music. Wongaster gave pretty good pointers, though. And your playing is good, I think that I heard some parts that could be a tad tighter, but nothing ear breaking. Keep up the good work!

If you'd like, choose anything from my Soundcloud.
#4
Hi silvadolla,

Great job creating an unique atmosphere in your composition of Resila. I like how you alternated between the heavy and clean parts.

I think the clean guitar could be given more clarity in the mix, they currently are heavily masked by the effects.

The ending could be a bit more gradual, but this could be based on my personal preference.

Overall a great composition!