#1
Hey guys inspiration just hit me so I just busted out this lovely in no more than an hour's time. Really pleased with the results but could use a 2nd opinion.

Best,

Kirborg
Attachments:
Lemonade.gp5
#2
i like this
I don't have a lot of time but
a few comments:
-trumpet part seems really angular, I'm having a hard time understanding what you're going for w/ them
-vocal melody is catchy, and the simple lyrics are complementing
-the solo (bars 34-41) didn't do anything for me. Personally I would keep the bubbly feeling the rest of the song has instead of the rhythm change you used there.
-spam some layers; a piano would sound really good especially if you let them flourish during the "lemonade" parts
i see your girl
G A Y
she leavin wit me

F O R
I'm playing wit her booty
in the back seat
M A D D E N