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Hey, that's not bad. I liked the music at the beginning - it was promising and I was wondering what any vocals/lyrics were gonna be like... unfortunately for me they were a bit hard to pick out. Could be higher in the mix. Musically it lost my attention in the middle but it picked up again. It's a song you could actually turn quite jazzy if you wanted, or you could've gone more grungey, but it's at an interesting point on that scale.

And the video's pretty cool, especially the outdoor bits.
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