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Been working on this tune for a week or so. Thoughts?

Now that we've had some time
To sit down and both unwind
I'd like to say how I really feel
I know this won't surprise
I just hope I might survive
Everything I gotta get across

For starters, here's one thing
It's that song you always sing
Stuck in my head like a wedding vow
Believe you, me, I'm right
I won't give up this fight
Until the very last breath I draw

This can't be what we both want
It's just all I think I need
Tell me I've got this wrong
Tell me we both belong
Tell me I've got this wrong
Stay here until the dawn

Why is it you can't see?
What's right here next to me
Lying down on this dirty floor
It might be my heart down there
And I know it isn't fair
Just stay awake a little while more

This can't be what we both want
It's just all I think I need
Tell me I've got this wrong
Tell me we both belong
Tell me I've got this wrong
Stay here until the dawn