#1
Here is demo of my song Wasted Love. This is first song I wrote all by myself and it means a lot to me.
I wanted to share this demo with You so I could hear your thoughts on it before further tracking of this tune.
Please let me know what you think about it..thanks for watching and listening

#2
Sounds really good on my Monitors

Excellent playing,singing and recording.If this is your first original song then you have no problems writing

The only small criticism would be that it needs a little bit more interest musically e.g maybe some synth strings after the 1st verse and then dropped and brought back later on and of course if you can harmonize it lends itself to some nice spots where you could double/triple track some vocal harmonies
#3
Thank you for all compliments and for your ideas of improving the song! I really appreciate it !
I will consider adding synth and vocal harmonies..your comment was really helpful