#2
logicbdj,
Intro (first few seconds) sounds quite pleasant. The lead guitar guitar is rather nice. There is something odd about the timing in this song though much of the time for me. Can't really put my finger on it, why I feel that way. The drum beat doesn't seem bizarre (I'm not saying it should). Vocals sound fine, I probably wouldn't complain if you had a bit more of that. Audio quality is pretty good. Perhaps you could review my music at this link:

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1711278
#3
I glad you find it odd... I like different... odd. I guess that's my style, lol.