#2
Quote by xterjaxtryuk327

but it doesn't really matter
I never asked you to stay

I don't want to hurt you
even though it seems fair
but sometimes I wonder
what your life is like there


I think these parts are the most solid to me and maybe it's just because I can relate to them the most. "I don't want to hurt you, even though it seems fair" is pretty on point. The last verse could use a bit of metaphor. It just kind of seems thrown in there compared to the others. Overall, I liked it.