#1
This is a very melodic song from the 2nd album, I made a guitar playthough of it

I hope the lightning is not too fucked up, I'd say that the cool parts are the rythm section after 0:20, and the weird solo at 1:03



Hope you enjoy! Post links to your stuff so I can review back!

Also, the actual "studio" recording here:

Check out my new remake project "Sentience" here:

https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLd4EXA_hrZcgzyuntURg8EX3Dia9rIG6J

Check out my 2nd album (prog metal) here:

https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLd4EXA_hrZciTCKYduj3hcgbicrASdnqr
Last edited by VStratto Music at Nov 9, 2016,
#2
Hey man. You are right. It is cool rythm parts there. Nice solo too.
About the quality of recording. if you had not recorded audio with camera or smth it would have been much better. Also you could use some multicamera.

But songwriting itself is awesome! Kind of reminded me Bulb - Breeze.

Keep rocking!!

C4C?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1712338
#3
Thanks for the compliments! But since I already have posted this song, for me the purpose of a playthrough is to play through the song in 1 take, then post the audio recording of me playing it, actually I am surprised this only took 1 take, I have not played this song in months

I'll go listen to your song now!
Check out my new remake project "Sentience" here:

https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLd4EXA_hrZcgzyuntURg8EX3Dia9rIG6J

Check out my 2nd album (prog metal) here:

https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLd4EXA_hrZciTCKYduj3hcgbicrASdnqr
#4
I agree with EY8CC, it would have been way better if you recorded the audio with something else than the camera.
I haven't heard this song, so I thought I could give some crit on it too :

Nice production man, the guitar sounds great!
I really like the part at 0:42. A good melodic contrast to thos
Cool solo at 1:13. And really nice playing as well! Love the arpeggios.
I really like how the the song keeps going forward without getting repetive.
This is some really good work, keep it up!

Crit for crit?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1712660