The punchy electric bass sounds more impressive than the mandolin, but you're playing the mandolin well. I'm not a Mandolin player, but I wonder how it would sound if you double-tracked it, and panned it to the left on one track, and to the right on the other track (or maybe you already did that, or have stereo delay). Wouldn't hurt to do the same on at least part of the rhythm guitar. For some reason the guitar & mandolin sounded more stereophonic on the second listen. The song itself is good, the singing is OK. Please review my music at this link:

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