So I've started working on my bands second album, but I've been loosing confidence in my writing. You see recently I was told by some close friends that they didn't like my lyrics that I wrote for are up and coming first album and really gave no real reason why. So I figured I would share a few of them with the internet to get some Constructive criticism. I will link are bandcamp page which has the song with the lyrics as well.
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