#1
Just a simple song I wrote in memory of a childhood friend.
Not sure if I'd call it finished yet, but I'd appreciate any feedback on areas that might be improved, I really want to get this one perfect.

https://soundcloud.com/dolor-projection/pine-dolor-projection-demo/s-b9Dc6

Naturally, just leave a link to the song you'd like a critique for and I will be happy to get back you as soon as I am possibly able.
#2
The production sounds great! Very clear tracks that sounded clear / distinct through out the mix.

You have a great voice, and I loved the overall vibe of the track.

A nice acoustic solo would go well!

Have a listen to my track and let me know what you think!
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1714467
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#3
Quote by hitman_47
The production sounds great! Very clear tracks that sounded clear / distinct through out the mix.

You have a great voice, and I loved the overall vibe of the track.

A nice acoustic solo would go well!

Have a listen to my track and let me know what you think!
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1714467



Thanks so much for the feed back.
I hadn't considered a solo, I will have to give that a go.
Sorry for the delay, I'll pop right over and check yours out now.
#4
Nice work. The guitar is recorded perfectly. Clear as a bell. I like your voice, do you have an effect on it or is that how it naturally sounds? Your lyrics are imaginative and clever.

How long did it take you to put this together? Write, record, etc. I'm curious about your process.

Please take a moment to check out my latest.
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1715345
Thanks
#5
whoknows I really like the vocals. I can appreciate a slower song like this. I'd add maybe a light drum track. And maybe a light melody instrument like violin or piano arpeggios would be nice too.

It's a great mix, I think. Very natural sounding. It's one of those calming kind of songs.

Can you check out my song, Ive got a lot of reviews on it already, but the extra two cents is always lovely.
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1715271
#6
Really nice man, guitar chords are lovely and clear, vocals compliment the vibe perfectly, Very soothing, I actually enjoy the minimalistic production of it all. The reverby chorus effect in the background is done really well too and doesn't intrude into the mix. Mixing wise it's spot on. Overall great work man the lyrics are really good too and don't feel cliched at all!
You can check out my track here (although it's quite different from yours): https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1715522