#1
Just a simple song I wrote in memory of a childhood friend.
Not sure if I'd call it finished yet, but I'd appreciate any feedback on areas that might be improved, I really want to get this one perfect.

https://soundcloud.com/dolor-projection/pine-dolor-projection-demo/s-b9Dc6

Naturally, just leave a link to the song you'd like a critique for and I will be happy to get back you as soon as I am possibly able.
#2
The production sounds great! Very clear tracks that sounded clear / distinct through out the mix.

You have a great voice, and I loved the overall vibe of the track.

A nice acoustic solo would go well!

Have a listen to my track and let me know what you think!
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1714467
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