#1
Short song that fits a bunch of styles into a 3 min length. Not a great performance but the composition came out great.

Tell me what you think, C4C etc. And also have a look at my other thread for another instrumental crit.

https://soundcloud.com/joe-bloggz-quigs/blend-weird-prog-metal
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#2
Cool, neat. I think that the awkward time sig at the beginning is, well, just awkward. But the composition did, indeed, come out great. I'm liking all the riffs and stuff. And it's like, metal but jazz, which is cool.

Overall, I think it's good as an experiment, but as an actual song, obviously it'd need some refining. Great job!