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Hey y'all! So. For ages now, I've been a metalhead, I can write riffs for days, but haven't evey been able to write metal lyrics. Finally, in my first decent co-write collab (with a wonderfully talented writer), it's coming out! We've only got a verse and a half written and I've been working on the instrumental part. Check out and critique our work in progress!

https://soundcloud.com/dennis-severance/metal-untitled-unfinished

I'm no metal singer...Here are the lyrics.

This is the place where dreams come to die
Nobody here knows the reason why
Who might we blame for the things that we've done?
With nowhere to hide now, why should we run?
Last edited by Mainer at Dec 19, 2016,