#1
Check out my Kataklysm - The Black Sheep Guitar Cover!
I used my Paul Reed Smith SE Torero guitar.
Enjoy!

#2
I don't know the song, but it sounds spot on with the rest of the track. Your melodies at 1:00 and 3:00 sound distractedly louder than the rest, but I get that you're trying to shine through the mix. Nice finger without losing rhythm!
Great downstroke stamina, kept that going for a while.
Beyond that, good playing man!
Check out my cover at: https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1716246
#3
EddieWan
You are absolutely right about the melodies! I take it as a good lesson, because i always upload a video after i edited it and listened back 1 or 2 times. Next time, after i'm done with the video, I will wait few hours or the next day and listen back with "clear ears". Than the mix will be better. Thank you for the building critic and the nice words!
I listened your cover song aswell. It sounds good, not bad mixing, However, its not my style at all. ..but I'm open minded
Have a nice day!