#1
You'll be confused
By what
You've got to lose
With what
You've got to gain
Until it brings you
Joy or pain

But I won't blame it
On the hands I've been dealt

That's just one of my tells

I've had enough
But greed has its ways

Maybe you can compare
What's insane
Shallow, vain
With what
Resides, inside
An impulsive brain
Last edited by 5wFisher at Sep 8, 2017,
#3
fair effort!! i like the concept and some lyrics are cool,id like to hear more of this.....not sure if you are happy like this or looking to expand it but good luck man