you're on the right track. but it is apparent that things could be improved.
A lot of the licks you did seemed rushed, the whole lick from :30-:40 on StH was off rhythmically and in a way I feel like the timing of both tracks shifted with the difficulty of the lick that you were performing instead of the actual beat of the song. Use a metronome. Or a backing track.
"ba doo doo ba doo doo ba doo daa"
- earth,wind, and fire
I definitely agree with hecks. You are definitely at a point where you are better than most, but there still is room for improvement. Definitely look into practicing alongside a metronome or a backing track/actual song. Hell, when I learn a song, I play alongside it in TuxGuitar util I get the feel of it.
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