#1
If you're on
As much drugs as me
Would you seek
Rehab or another fix

You're over the
Show is now
Over time to
Roll over

If Mcfly flew
In a
Motion picture
Back to the
Future part two
#2
I think a lot of your work would benefit from not having a line break every 5 or 6 syllables.  Really work on extending lines and using your word choice to bring interest and meter instead of the hard breaks.  Freeform is a curse and a blessing like that, moderation takes practice.