#1
If you're on
As much drugs as me
Would you seek
Rehab or another fix

You're over the
Show is now
Over time to
Roll over

If Mcfly flew
In a
Motion picture
Back to the
Future part two
Quote by laid-to-waste
look nigga, if you're chillin with 5 bros and 2 hos, you're gonna wanna pay attention to all of em equally. not moon over the hos forever and laugh at every shitty thing they say and just stare at them all night, like some of my mates do.
#2
I think a lot of your work would benefit from not having a line break every 5 or 6 syllables.  Really work on extending lines and using your word choice to bring interest and meter instead of the hard breaks.  Freeform is a curse and a blessing like that, moderation takes practice. 
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