#2
While you're kinda right about the melodic direction of things, I'm not quite hearing where the trip hop elements are supposed to be other than the programme-y nature of everything and the dense amount of closed hi hat.

For the sake of humanity, I personally would avoid adding harsh vocals of any sort at all to this song. This would be better as an instrumental with an actual instrument melody line.
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#3
Thank you 🙂 It's important to go with initial expression but will consider
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#7
aaayeeeeeeeeeee eh ya i do appreciate that y'all three came to say hi, really that's gonna be a lot to consider. ..especially,,
#8
nigga what the fuck are u talking about man, epi came here and gave a constructive crit and you got mad and deleted everything. what up doe
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