#1
Eight cylinder engine
He's on the move
He's the kind of rebel
With nothing to lose

Beer cans on the floorboard
Country music on the radio
Heading for a breakdown
Nowhere else to go

A mean machine, snorting fire
A pinch into his own supply
She had to cut him loose
Bad news until the day he dies
Last edited by 5wFisher at Sep 8, 2017,
#2
As a read poem I think that more attention could be made to punctuation and where you break the lines. However, if this is the lyrics format km sure it's fine. Overall good theme. I would reuse the same word at all unless you have a purpose for the repetition.
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