#1
 This Moving Universe
 
This two-faced duality 
The high and the low 
Spans the universe 
Inside my skull
 
A daily cosmic collision 
Piece the planets 
Assemble the stars
 
Give me 
The anchors 
Save me 
I drift alone
 
A mirror in mind 
Of all my existence 
Spans the universe 
Inside my skull
 
Every system   
Is my devil 
A lurking black hole
 

Give me   
The anchors 
Save me 
I drift alone
 
The chemicals craft 
A station 
I can reassemble 
A shattered glass puzzle


Give me   
The anchors 
Save me 
I drift alone
 
Guitar/Bass:
Schecter: Damien 6/Stilletto Extreme 5, Squier: Bullet HSS*, Washburn RX10*/WG-587, Agile Septor 727
*mods

Amps/FX
Peavey: Vypyr 30/Max 112 (200W), ISP: Decimator

Quote by dannyalcatraz
Understood- I waste money on amps*, too.

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#2
Nice. Makes me think about the idea that our understanding of the universe is essentially personal, so that every human has a universe inside of their mind and it's never going to be the same as anybody elses. 
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#3
Thanks.

I wrote it about some mental illnesses, specifically, bipolar disorder and schizophrenia
Guitar/Bass:
Schecter: Damien 6/Stilletto Extreme 5, Squier: Bullet HSS*, Washburn RX10*/WG-587, Agile Septor 727
*mods

Amps/FX
Peavey: Vypyr 30/Max 112 (200W), ISP: Decimator

Quote by dannyalcatraz
Understood- I waste money on amps*, too.

justinguitar.com is the answer
#4
The chemicals craft 
A station 
I can reassemble 
A shattered glass puzzle  


This part hits the nail on the head for me. I definitely empathise with what this piece is trying to say.

Oh and thanks for leaving a reply on mine.
#5
Quote by bjgrifter
Thanks.

I wrote it about some mental illnesses, specifically, bipolar disorder and schizophrenia


I have anxiety and social anxiety.
I connected with it right away.
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#6
I like how you portray loneliness. I isolate. I feel alone even with friends and family. I can relate to this piece.
Last edited by 5wFisher at May 4, 2017,