#1
https://palliatefl.bandcamp.com/track/ride-mix-5-5

I wrote this in a day and I've been trying to improve it. It's about the comedian Harris Wittels's death and how it affected me.

I'm super proud of the breakdown at 2:31 but I'd love some suggestions on the pre-chorus and chorus (vocal melodies aren't super exciting) and mix. Link me to your stuff too!
#2
I think the voice suits a lot the song and the genre (in fact, it reminds me of the vocalist from some other Punk band but I can't point out which one). I can say I enjoyed this song all the way through, the breakdown was very catchy and uplifting. The verse vocals are really catchy too, but the chorus was a little more forgettable to me, as the placement of  the "to push aside" line was a little awkward. 
Other than that, it was very nice and you should be proud of it!

C4C? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1740228