Hello There.

Thanks for the comment on my track.

This has some nice riffs going on. I like the guitar tone too - just the right amount of grunt without too much distortion. I'm not generally a fan of purely instrumental tracks and this feels to me a little bit like a track that is waiting for the vocals to be added to complete it. I'm not quite sure about the quick change in drum tempo later in the track - I get the idea but it didnt feel quite natural for me.

The mix is a little rough and ready - particularly where the drums are concerned. I would suggest cutting some of the lower mids out of the kick drum. Maybe some additional high end eq on the snare to emphasise the attack.