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#1
..and it feels so good til finally have it out there! Would really love to hear what you guys think about the song and the video!


 
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#3
Actually pretty sweet.

Not so into the music but that's just because I look for less 'rocky' stuff but those groovy riffs are really great.
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#4
Love the song. 

Music video was... Interesting. Like, I was getting Wyatt Family vibes at the end.
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#5
Actually a lot better than I expected. Nice job.


Please tell me you aren't the dork wearing sunglasses at night tho
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#7
I honestly just clicked this thread to laugh at everyone making fun of the video/song, but it's actually really good.
#9
Awesome I think the song is great, killer groove! The production was excellent on both the audio and video. Beware you don't get banned like poor Pavlickk!
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#11
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Actually a lot better than I expected. Nice job.


Please tell me you aren't the dork wearing sunglasses at night tho

Thank you all for the great responses! We really appreciate it!

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#12
Thought it would be junk but I'm not gonna lie, I dig it.
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#15
i was so ready to shit all over this

my only complaint is its generic but i like all kinds of generic shit so im a hypocrite but it wasnt bad by any means

edit: this is just nitpicky personal taste shit but i would throw a minihumbucker in that tele and beef it up
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#17
yeah what everyone else said tbh
dirtbag ballet by the bins down the alley
as i walk through the chalet of the shadow of death
everything that you've come to expect


#18
Great song, video is decently produced, and I do believe Euell Gibbons would approve.
#19
Quote by Primus2112
i was so ready to shit all over this

my only complaint is its generic but i like all kinds of generic shit so im a hypocrite but it wasnt by any means

edit: this is just nitpicky personal taste shit but i would throw a minihumbucker in that tele and beef it up

That entire post is about you.
#20
Singer sounds way too much like Layne Staley

But obviously that's on purpose, since the rest of the music is similarly grunge ish.

Great work, no doubt
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#21
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That entire post is about you.


yes it is

he asked what I thought of it
so I said what I thought of it

imagine that

edit: I missed a word up there I meant to say it wasn't bad by any means, that does change it quite a bit
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#22
11/10 Would hear again

Can you make a GP of this song? That would be great! And by the way, those masks look cool.
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#23
Nice work what was the budget for the video if you don't mind me asking?
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#24
Like others I was very surprised to hear something decent. May i ask what effects you used on the lead guitar?

The only thing I wasnt a fan of was the vocals. But probably just my musical tastes. He has a very cool sound but I had a difficult time actually understanding what he was singing about.

The video was shot well but without knowing what was being sung i have no idea what the video represents.
#25
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Singer sounds way too much like Layne Staley


Agree. Very Layne Staley.

Also.

I hope you guys become successful enough to afford real jeans.


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#26
nice song and video !

vocalist kinda sounds like layne staley

edti: yup, and pretty much everyone agrees lol ^^^
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#27
Excellent. Nice mix and very good song. One minor comment: I found it a little too long. That's just me. It's very good.
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#29
Thanks for the constructive criticism, it's always refreshing to hear!

UFC on VHS: The budget was around 1k

N8dagreat3: The effects on the lead guitar is first a flanger for the first part and then a delay for the rest of the solo
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#31
Nice !  
less eq/verb on the vocals woulda been nicer
and come up with a riff to challenge my grams plxxx
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#32
I only wish Peppers was here to see this

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Live my twisted dream
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#33
Not bad.  Not bad at all.  Good quality on the video and great sound.  Songs not bad either.

Good job.
#34
Antimage27 Thank you for that piece of constructive criticism! What do you mean by " and come up with a riff to challenge my grams plxxx "?
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#35
wyldelife  haha i was on the joking side of my grandma played it without much difficulty :P
but dw hot pepper .. add nudity for appeal in live applications 
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#37
jay seeny could learn from this.
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#38
drdoom8793 Dude, me too! I've been a part of this page for a decade now, and I know that the pit can get a bit "trolly" at times :P To tell you the truth, I'm a bit moved by all the positive responses. Really appreciate the constructive criticism given as well!
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