#1
He speaks through grit teeth, locked up and jaundiced,
with yellow menace tinging through his bug eyes -
A limped, cracked boogin' from the deep dark pages of lore.
Takes a bite of this, a sip of that, grabs a chair and drags it back
to a group of pretty cool guys -
Brings it all in and erupts with rapturous roar,
"Ho! Ho! You Knights of Summer best get set for the cold!
I take what I like and yeah, I'm always right!
I'd drive a hunni'd miles just for a good fight."

Everything is gone, from 1st to Maple -
They gotta make room for the vape stores.
He roams in soiled clothes, hunched over, an incontinent bore.
And every fountain drink is a little bit sweeter than
the 44 ounces that came before,
A slow eroded march until he comes into his reward.

We've been down this road -
It leads to bones and ghosts and Pay Day Loans.
Who would've thought a thing could get this old?
"Who've thought he'd die outside a Cash 4 Gold?"
Poor advice.
#2
Have to say I enjoyed this quite a bit.
Good read.
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#4
i used to read you as gospel once upon a time and you have stayed with me over the years. it's a little derivative to say but there's something isaac brockish about the way you capture white trash melancholy. you're a special voice. i'm glad you're still writing.
#5
What a nice picture of modern despotic America! Aye, this paints a picture. The boorishness... This isn't revelatory, but it's a solid read nonetheless.
I am a fake mountain.
#6
Quote by NGD1313
i used to read you as gospel once upon a time and you have stayed with me over the years. it's a little derivative to say but there's something isaac brockish about the way you capture white trash melancholy. you're a special voice. i'm glad you're still writing.

this, so, so much.
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いっちにっちいっぽみーかでさんぽ
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