#1
All these big houses
with the lights off,
empty of life
empty of love
empty of hope
and dreams
and laughter
and delight.

Where do these houses end
and I begin? 
#2
I dig the use of repetition and the imagery. 7/10
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#3
Good work. Reminded me of the shallow existence of my family. I liked the end, realizing I'm not as different from them as I think I am.
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#4
Short but sweet.  I like hope and dreams being paired together.
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