#1
i see you always -
blowing butterflies from your coffee,
a clement ghost
laid again upon my chest.
still your two blue eyes 
searching for ends while i'm
wearily working out the means.
so afraid yet
to see the place the water splits
to be the paddle and watch the pond forget
even though there is where i know you best.
again & again & again.
#2
This is odd, but specifically mentioning that the other person has two blue eyes is unnecessary. Considering the interesting application of the title, that detail is rudimentary. I'd work more on the opening and closing images if you're to make this any longer. They are thoughtful and unique.
I am a fake mountain.