#1
And I lost myself again tonight
And I dont know when I'll feel alright
keep starring at the bottom 
lookin for answers
that I know will never come 
They never come

And as the room it starts to spin
I know im not the sort to win
I Keep looking for a safe
Place to stop
No harbour tonight
No not Tonight

<<Chorus>>
And the Whis-ky makes me think
And the mind is runnin free....
The truth it start to sink
That the hole in my life is me

And as the time, it evaporates
And I give so willingly 
Hatred of this state
A mirror of me

The change is becoming me
The change is becoming me

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And I saw the sunlight break tonight
But I dont know if I can face the fight
Keep searching all the skys 
Looking for answers
But they never come 
They never come


As the flowers they all bloom for you
But they die as one  when Im in view
So I pass on by as if
Nothing is wrong
But they never bloom again
No not again

<<Chorus>>
And the Whisky makes me think
And the mind is runnin free...
The truth it start to sink
That the hole in my life is me

And as the time, it evaporates
And I give so willingly 
Hatred of this state
A mirror of me

The change is becoming me
The change is becoming me
Last edited by Hamsterspanker at May 27, 2017,
#2
You have a few typographical errors, so be careful when typing it out. That or I should turn off my teacher brain. Ah well.

You really need more concrete details here as the most vivid information supplied is about being drunk and depressed. It's a lot of navel-gazing without clarity. That's all well and good, and most people have been there for spells, but what makes the circumstances for the speaker unique? The chorus works for the most part, but it's the lack of details in the verses that only serve to dilute your purpose here.
I am a fake mountain.