#1
 She Burns My Eyes
 
Once,   
A radiant beauty 
I loved 
A goddess to me
Blinded 
To fragile connections 
Youthful bliss, young ignorance 
Feeble I am when the cloud came over 
Now
 
 
She burns my eyes 
I must turn away 
Staggered   
With shattered knees
 
This high, 
From the grace 
Bestowed to me 
Craving a union   
Stumbling to eyes wide 
The time frozen 
Beauty to paralyze 
Now I know 
Not even worthy
 
 
She burns my eyes 
I must turn away 
Staggered   
With shattered knees
 
The master fool I am 
Claiming love 
Affinity for connection   
Keeping a hand, 
Keep from the disconnect 
Captivating a beauty 
Worthy for fighting 
When I am blind 

She burns my eyes 
I must turn away 
Staggered   
With shattered knees 
Guitar/Bass:
Schecter: Damien 6/Stilletto Extreme 5, Squier: Bullet HSS*, Washburn RX10*/WG-587, Agile Septor 727
*mods

Amps/FX
Peavey: Vypyr 30/Max 112 (200W), ISP: Decimator

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#2
This is all relatively standard, but my question is this: What's with the shattered knees? From genuflecting adoration? Or were you just looking for a reason to say the speaker staggered? That's really my only question here. Cheers as always.
I am a fake mountain.
#3
That was additional emphasis.
Guitar/Bass:
Schecter: Damien 6/Stilletto Extreme 5, Squier: Bullet HSS*, Washburn RX10*/WG-587, Agile Septor 727
*mods

Amps/FX
Peavey: Vypyr 30/Max 112 (200W), ISP: Decimator

Quote by dannyalcatraz
Understood- I waste money on amps*, too.

justinguitar.com is the answer
#4
Fair enough. I'm a bit nitpicky. Sorry and cheers.
I am a fake mountain.
#5
No worries.
I'm playing around with having a complete story or expression, so I decided to try something other than being pissed off. I had the "She Burns My Eyes" part floating around in my head and finally came up with a concept to use it in.
Guitar/Bass:
Schecter: Damien 6/Stilletto Extreme 5, Squier: Bullet HSS*, Washburn RX10*/WG-587, Agile Septor 727
*mods

Amps/FX
Peavey: Vypyr 30/Max 112 (200W), ISP: Decimator

Quote by dannyalcatraz
Understood- I waste money on amps*, too.

justinguitar.com is the answer
#6
It's good to try new things from time to time. In the words of Wu-Tang Financial,
I am a fake mountain.