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Oh my, nothing like Randy style, this is awesome! Very smooth playing, melodic and emotive. A few rough bits like around 1:20 but you kept it together. I would say your tremolo picking could use a little work, those parts threw it off a bit, but that aside this was very cool. Just ripping away, all the little breaks where fantastic and you really milked this scale for all it's worth, it's a bit long for the length but you keep it going. That bend at 3:27! Wicked! For an imrpov this is very cool, I'm sure it'd be even better if you planned it a bit but as it is this is just some rad jamming! 

If you dare for c4c this is my very silly stuff 
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1747174