#1
Hello,

So this is my first REAL REAL song i've written, lyrics and everything, i don't consider my previous "Doodling" actual songwriting.

https://soundcloud.com/uptheskyestonia/hold-on-tight

Few Thing To mention -
1. This is just a demo with a soft Mix-Master done, we will most definitely re-record the song.
2. I've been singing only for two years, any feedback is very helpful.
 3. I've been Songwriting for about two years.
3. Here are the Lyrics to the song.

The theme i was going for is
"The feeling of being overwhelmingly positive & Full of Energy but using drugs as a metaphor"

Sitting calm, and nervous too,
I've been given something and i don't know,
how to feel.
The world is warm, is looking gold
Im loosing my mind, loosing control
Oh is it right to feel this way?

Im taking off, taking flight,
give me something to hold on tight.

REF:
Super easy, super high
Soaring trough where eagles fly
Super easy, super high
I have seen guiding light.

Im looking young, im feeling fresh,
My worries gone without a hitch
At the speed of sound, its running trough
the champagne foam has given me hope.

But now its gone, i don't wanna fall down!

REF:
Super easy, super high
Soaring trough where eagles fly
Super easy, super high
I have seen guiding light.


Any and all feedback is welcome. 
Have an awesome day!
#2
I've listened to the track a few times now and I really like it, you can really hear some Muse and Royal Blood from it!

The only thing I'd have to say about it is that "super easy, super high" sounds a bit quiet and muffled but overall it's a great track IMO!