I recently started practicing guitar again regularly after a couple of years away from serious playing and I'm looking for constructive criticism


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Jebus H Crisps, slow down!  That tune is all about atmosphere and feel, you're rushing it so hard that you're loosing anything that makes the song special.

I mean, your technique is fine enough, but holy crap...
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“A man who mistakes secrets for knowledge is like a man who, seeking light, hugs a candle so closely that he smothers it and burns his hand.”

Yeah, that's literally all we can tell from that video, you're rushing, if you aren't happy with your playing specifically for this song, slowing down will help you play each note accurately and cleanly. There's nothing wrong with you're playing here that won't get better if you manage your speed.