#1
Mind is the prison
Heart is the key
Can you be pure
Or sink to debauchery 

Been down so long
Rowing this ship as five
When we need twenty more

Murder
Murder
Is that what it takes to win?

from the video

#2
Honestly, this doesn't make a lot of sense. You have three separate ideas, and they don't coalesce into any tangible meaning. I'd work on mending the pieces together into being a more cohesive piece.
I am a fake mountain.