#1
Hi i play since few months guitar, my only problem is that i have just an acoustic guitar that is a little bit broken/ doesn't work right (but this doesn't matter at the moment). I tryed to make my own tabs for my own 'song' or how you wanna call it. It's very simple but it would be a pleasure for me, if you can rate it and give me a feedback what can i make better:

A 77xx77xx77xx75777xx77xx77xx77
E 55xx55xx55xx53555xx55xx55xx55

A 9 10 11 9 12 7
E 7  8    9  7 10 5

D    9    7    9    5    9    7    9    12
A    7    5    7    3    7    5    7    10
E 0    0    0   0    0    0    0    0

D 99xx99xx77xx77xx1212xx1212xx55xx55xx
A 77xx77xx55xx55xx1010xx1010xx33xx33xx

D 9999999977777777 12 12 12 12 12 12 12 12
A 7777777755555555 10 10 10 10 10 10 10 10

D 55555555
A 33333333
#2
Please use the code tags in the advanced controls of the forum and place hyphens between all notes; this is really hard to read.

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/lessons/for_beginners/guide_to_tab_notation.html

Additionally, since there's no time information, it's hard to tell how it sounds. Maybe you can try using something like TuxGuitar and upload a Guitar Pro file?

This forum might be more appropriate:
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/forumdisplay.php?f=46