xxsongwriter
Registered User
Join date: Oct 2005
21 IQ
#1
You laugh at her jokes,
Even though I told them first.
You look at her the way I look at you,
this makes everything worse.
When you?re around her you try to act tough.
And I know in my heart I?ll never be good enough.

Chorus
I miss you - when you?re not around.
But baby when you're there to catch me,
I?ll never hit the ground.
I know it sounds so easy,
but it?s just a fantasy.


When you?re around I can?t help but smile.
Will you talk to me just for a while?
It?ll brighten my day, If you decide to stay.
I know you don?t realize how I feel.
So I?ll never really know if these emotions are real.

Chorus
I miss you - when you?re not around.
But baby when you're there to catch me,
I?ll never hit the ground.
I know it sounds so easy,
but it?s just a fantasy.


I hope you notice how I stare,
I bet you do but you don?t care.
So won?t you listen to what I say?
We?ll see if it ends up my way.
jimmyjimjim
D? is for Danger?!
Join date: Apr 2005
99 IQ
#2
its sounds like an emo song, but its good if you want to go in that direction. actually, its pretty good anyways. dont make it an emo song though, so dont scream any of it. yeah, good work.
Lilee_Relvis
UG interlectual
Join date: Feb 2005
33 IQ
#5
Think you could give us some chords?
Where did it all go right?
xxsongwriter
Registered User
Join date: Oct 2005
21 IQ
#7
i'm working on the chords.
i know it's inthe wrong thread i reposted it in the songwriting one.
182bitterstarts
Registered User
Join date: Sep 2005
178 IQ
#8
the first line in the chorus is taken from a simple plan song but other than that its pretty good
Hardin
Banned
Join date: Oct 2005
718 IQ
#10
"You look at her the way I look at you"

Is she gay? OR are you?
xxsongwriter
Registered User
Join date: Oct 2005
21 IQ
#11
Um no? it means he looks at another girl the way i look at him.